Civil War

Civil War

A Poem by Oswell Thatinswell
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This is a Poem i made a few years ago about the civil war when i was learning about it in S.S.

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Cavalry and Infantry fight and yell
Inept is many who try and fail
Valiantly some opted for peace
Inevitable was a war to be
Long, Bloody, Vicious, and Wrong
War swept this nation with its terrible gong
Ashen faced Brothers lie in puddles of each others gore
Redemption of a race was a result of that War


© 2010 Oswell Thatinswell



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Nice! I may be Canadian, but really this works for any civil war in general. Picture also adds to feel

Posted 7 Years Ago


A beautiful piece love!
War is something I am strongly against and this strikes a nreve :) That gong resonates!
Awesome!
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2010
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Tags: Civil War, War, Bloodshed, Brothers, Arms, Fighting, Death, Redemption, Ashen, Destruction, USA