Echoes on the Mist

Listen intently to echoes 

   wafting off the mist of

   exalted mountains whispering, 

as designed poetry 'neath ether

   rapturously incites secrets 

      of versed journeys' resolve

 while quintessence reawakens

  'tween passages of stardust

     and eclipsed lunar moons,

knowledge of a lofty universe 

   lavishing abundant resources,

      whorling sumptuous seascapes

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

This reminds me stories: untold stories; unknown stories. I seldom find myself walking in beautiful places, or looking at the houses in my streets and just wondering about all the hidden stories in them. Sometimes the wind and sounds of the seas feel like as if they're teasing us with untold secrets. We've all shared things and places; perhaps at different times and age, and we will never know about them. I find that concept so fascinating.

Beautiful piece. It brought such wonder to my table.

[1VJ]

What an utterly poetic review, thanks so much Alice.

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhh wow! so subtly profound says i ... you have cracked and lifted up the "poem" in all its beauty and depth .. love love love this my friend .. well chosen language .. well thought out ... reflects the deep well it comes from ..respect Paloma!! :)
E.

[Ed Hart]

your level of cerebration is daunting...for me, your poetic expressions are a 'one breath' experience; if i pause to breathe, i have to begin again

[Valentine]

Your choice of words leaves the reader in a dreamy atmosphere. Valentine

[1VJ]

Thanks very much Valentine.

[Lydia Shutter]

Who has walked down the same seashore we walk upon? What lovers have kissed as they heard echoes of the ocean hitting the shoreline? The world is filled with poetry and if inanimate objects could whisper secrets to us, we would never run out of poetry. A dreamy magical write. I liked it. Lydi**

[1VJ]

I really like your interpretation Lydi. Thanks so much. Hopefully, we never run out of poetry. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. The strong description of nature took me to better places and thoughts. Thank you Paloma for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[1VJ]

Funny, I just read your magnificent opus and was blown away. Thanks so much Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Paloma.

[Diamond]

This poem consists of almost all of the nature. Which you have elegantly expressed through the sound and sensation of a poem. It is very beautiful.

[1VJ]

Much appreciate your sentiment, thanks Queen. :)

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Nature is all about emotion and I love how you use its voice to give us a taste of yours. The imagery is a majestic exhale. I love the expression :)

[1VJ]

'Majestic exhale' I love that, thanks kindly!

[Lyn Anderson]

There is a disquiet I was not expecting by its title. There is a seething under this ... something big, and waiting, just beneath the surface. Some very interesting poetry of late ...

[1VJ]

Wow, I love your interpretation, are you psychic perchance?

[Lyn Anderson]

Perceptive of the underneath. That's how I think of it.

[1VJ]

You're good.

[ms. barrie]

I must say, Paloma, that this is utterly gorgeous...
written with exquisite imagery and choice of words.
I absolutely adore this ink! I look forward to visiting
your art again, soon. Thank you for sharing
~ X - barrie

[1VJ]

Thanks so much ms. barrie for your time, and such a glowing review, much appreciated.

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome, Paloma,
the pleasure was all mine ~ 🌸