Echoes on the Mist

Echoes on the Mist

A Poem by Paloma
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whorling sumptuous seascapes

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Listen intently to echoes 
   wafting off the mist of
   exalted mountains whispering, 
as designed poetry 'neath ether
   rapturously incites secrets 
      of versed journeys' resolve
 while quintessence reawakens
  'tween passages of stardust
     and eclipsed lunar moons,
knowledge of a lofty universe 
   lavishing abundant resources,
      whorling sumptuous seascapes


© 2016 Paloma



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This reminds me stories: untold stories; unknown stories. I seldom find myself walking in beautiful places, or looking at the houses in my streets and just wondering about all the hidden stories in them. Sometimes the wind and sounds of the seas feel like as if they're teasing us with untold secrets. We've all shared things and places; perhaps at different times and age, and we will never know about them. I find that concept so fascinating.

Beautiful piece. It brought such wonder to my table.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

1 Year Ago

What an utterly poetic review, thanks so much Alice.



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ohhhhhh wow! so subtly profound says i ... you have cracked and lifted up the "poem" in all its beauty and depth .. love love love this my friend .. well chosen language .. well thought out ... reflects the deep well it comes from ..respect Paloma!! :)
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


your level of cerebration is daunting...for me, your poetic expressions are a 'one breath' experience; if i pause to breathe, i have to begin again

Posted 11 Months Ago


Your choice of words leaves the reader in a dreamy atmosphere. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much Valentine.
Who has walked down the same seashore we walk upon? What lovers have kissed as they heard echoes of the ocean hitting the shoreline? The world is filled with poetry and if inanimate objects could whisper secrets to us, we would never run out of poetry. A dreamy magical write. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Paloma

1 Year Ago

I really like your interpretation Lydi. Thanks so much. Hopefully, we never run out of poetry. :)
This reminds me stories: untold stories; unknown stories. I seldom find myself walking in beautiful places, or looking at the houses in my streets and just wondering about all the hidden stories in them. Sometimes the wind and sounds of the seas feel like as if they're teasing us with untold secrets. We've all shared things and places; perhaps at different times and age, and we will never know about them. I find that concept so fascinating.

Beautiful piece. It brought such wonder to my table.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

1 Year Ago

What an utterly poetic review, thanks so much Alice.
I enjoyed this poem. The strong description of nature took me to better places and thoughts. Thank you Paloma for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Paloma

1 Year Ago

Funny, I just read your magnificent opus and was blown away. Thanks so much Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Paloma.
This poem consists of almost all of the nature. Which you have elegantly expressed through the sound and sensation of a poem. It is very beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Paloma

1 Year Ago

Much appreciate your sentiment, thanks Queen. :)
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Nature is all about emotion and I love how you use its voice to give us a taste of yours. The imagery is a majestic exhale. I love the expression :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Paloma

1 Year Ago

'Majestic exhale' I love that, thanks kindly!
There is a disquiet I was not expecting by its title. There is a seething under this ... something big, and waiting, just beneath the surface. Some very interesting poetry of late ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

1 Year Ago

Wow, I love your interpretation, are you psychic perchance?
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Perceptive of the underneath. That's how I think of it.
Paloma

1 Year Ago

You're good.
I must say, Paloma, that this is utterly gorgeous...
written with exquisite imagery and choice of words.
I absolutely adore this ink! I look forward to visiting
your art again, soon. Thank you for sharing
~ X - barrie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much ms. barrie for your time, and such a glowing review, much appreciated.
ms. barrie

1 Year Ago

you're most welcome, Paloma,
the pleasure was all mine ~ 🌸

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