She was finally gone

She was finally gone

A Poem by PandaPeaceful

I feel myself fading away.
Every cut, every tear,
every breath I take,
is another reminder,
of the things I have done.

I stand in front of the mirror,
analyzing the new me.
Who is she?
I clasp my hands around my hair,
and visualise the past.

But she was gone,
like a melting tear,
she was gone.
My eyes tighten as I realize,
she was finally gone.


© 2017 PandaPeaceful



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PandaPeaceful
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It's a great poem I really liked it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

10 Months Ago

Thank you!
Schizophrenia I think can happen too between the old and new You, the moment of realisation when You wake up looking to Your face, anew, feeling it's over! glad it is!

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

10 Months Ago

Great perspective! Thank you for your review!
So little words had so much to say, touching piece......
Keep the good work

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
AcasualPAWN

10 Months Ago

It's my pleasure
This is a brilliant piece of work. Brief, but so in depth.

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
Wow! My story exactly.. It's beautiful

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Wow. I would love to look in the mirror one day and say "she's finally gone" lovely piece

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

11 Months Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it!
What is the theme of this poem? It's great!

Posted 11 Months Ago


PandaPeaceful

11 Months Ago

Thanks! The poem talks about the past and the act of letting the old self go. Have a lovely day!

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