This is the little prologue, or author's (Adri's) note.
I cannot believe I lost the draw.
That means I have to put this dumb book together, and in my opinion, that is just plain stupid. I wish the others never even thought of this thing.
Honestly, this whole book thing wasn't even my choice, really. It's dangerous...puts out a lot of unnecessary risk. They could track us through this thing, and then we'd all be sorry. Whatever. We voted, and before you can say, "Wait, this idea is incredibly stupid," I'm writing a book. However, you don't have to read it...you have a choice.
If you're still reading this, you've probably just decided to keep reading the entire book.
Congrats.
But don't say I didn't warn you.
'Cause I did. Just now. Reading this book may be dangerous for your health, and I am not responsible. If you feel like this is too scary for you to handle, I don't blame you. I'd put down the book, if I had a choice.
But I don't.
I don't know if I will be able to finish this book; it's a big risk, telling my story.
This was a really good start, even though it was so short. It definitely makes me want to read more.
I did see one grammar error. "... and then we'd would be sorry." "We'd" is the conjugation for "we would", so that other "would" is redundant. I would suggest just using "we'd" to stay with the character's voice, but "we would" could also work.
*swallows nervously* I-I'm ready! Seriously, this gave me an emotional reaction, which is the best thing an author can hope for, to really connect with the readers. And, trust me, i connected.
This was a really good start, even though it was so short. It definitely makes me want to read more.
I did see one grammar error. "... and then we'd would be sorry." "We'd" is the conjugation for "we would", so that other "would" is redundant. I would suggest just using "we'd" to stay with the character's voice, but "we would" could also work.
My name is Bella Catten. I am fifteen years old, and love writing books, although I am terrible at finishing them. My goal is to finish at least ONE book, and maybe get it published.
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