It's Fun To Watch Shadows Drown.

It's Fun To Watch Shadows Drown.

A Poem by L0v3craft
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Surreal poetry...again :]]

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A conspiracy of crows drinks from tangerine-bloated streams

Beyond the gulf of weather-beaten dreams.

Shadows trip upside down;

In the floating gulf of phantom eyes, I watch them drown.

 

Preparing to breathe down a spider-neck’s boney back thighs,

My clever lil’ lungs pollinated air with subtitled sighs.

I resurrect the shadows from within

Only because I wanted to watch them drown again.

© 2012 L0v3craft


Author's Note

L0v3craft
...ooga-booga.

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twisted and sweet ...like a candy you cannot eat, die of hunger while a deadly treat slips from your hands to fall to your feet. :) I like this poem PSA!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful! Beautiful surrealism!

Posted 11 Years Ago


your writing has a strong tendency to pull you in with each line, I noticed. That's good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


L0v3craft

11 Years Ago

thank you for that!

^-^
like that, '...ooga-booga.' and, very much like this razor sharp penning. flow and verse grab and hold - excellent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This makes me think of something you would find from Alan Moore, like a small script in a graphic novel, writing on a wall so to speak.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful dark imagery... love it... nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great read, I really enjoy this type of poetry and it had been a while since I had read one this good. I love the title and how it encompasses the whole poem perfectly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Absolutely love this poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


get the feeling, get the image...absolutely awesome.


Posted 11 Years Ago


love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2012
Last Updated on May 4, 2012
Tags: surrealism, nonsense, shadows, dark, random

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L0v3craft
L0v3craft

NPR, FL



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"I embrace my desire to feel the rhythm, to feel connected enough to step aside and weep like a widow to feel inspired, to fathom the power, to witness the beauty, to bathe in the fountain, .. more..

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