Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by Kathryn Smith

I caught your gaze


And


If your eyes could speak


What would they say?


My heart is a fire


And my soul the smoke


Rising


Above ashes


I have looked all over


For you
















© 2017 Kathryn Smith



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I started this, loving it . . . but my love for your message grows & grows, until the ending sentiment that resonates with so much that I've felt in my life: "I have looked all over for you" . . . this could mean a special person or it could mean God or it could mean finding one's own truth (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Awwww shux. Thank you Barelygirl! :) It was about this man in church who caught my eye...and we had .. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Many times I write with one narrow idea in mind, but reviewers show me delightfully different ways t.. read more
Ah exquisite
I love this truly

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Thank you! :D I really like it too. xx
So beautiful, this is very well written and expressed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Thank you! :D
Beautifully done, full of passion. Our eyes, the windows to our soul and to our hearts. Amazing, very well done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Aww well thank you very much for stopping by to read my work! :D
Those eyes. When someone want to tempt us. Those eyes can steal our mind and our heart. Thank you Kathryn for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Thank you Coyote! :D Your words always mean a lot to me. xx
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are very kind and you are welcome my friend.
Superb Kathryn! Wistful, yearning, hopeful, eloquent. Brava!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much Annette! :) Cheers. Hope you had a great new year! xx
Annette Pisano Higley

1 Month Ago

You’re very welcome dear. Happy New Year to you! Xo
i loved this.. beautiful..

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

Aww thank you! :)
' .. .. the smoke ~ Rising ~~ Above ashes ~~ I have looked all over ~~ For you .. '

The first half - fine though it is, leads to such beautiful, yearning words that made me gasp! You have the true poet's touch of 'story telling' wih sensitivity and sincerity. Whether fact or fiction.. the meaning calls out. Sigh.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Kathryn Smith

1 Month Ago

I know this is late but thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :33 Your comment means a lot to .. read more

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