Eyes

I caught your gaze

And

If your eyes could speak

What would they say?

My heart is a fire

And my soul the smoke

Rising

Above ashes

I have looked all over

For you

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. .. the smoke ~ Rising ~~ Above ashes ~~ I have looked all over ~~ For you .. '

The first half - fine though it is, leads to such beautiful, yearning words that made me gasp! You have the true poet's touch of 'story telling' wih sensitivity and sincerity. Whether fact or fiction.. the meaning calls out. Sigh.

[Kathryn Smith]

I know this is late but thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :33 Your comment means a lot to me!

[Ghania]

Oh wow!
A lovely piece!! Loved it. :)

[Kathryn Smith]

Aw thanks so much! :D

[Ghania]

You're always welcome Kathryn. ;p