Jet

Jet

You break through

my calm

like a whirring

blade of steel

as you race through the sky

parting the blue earth

with such

power.

You make me wince

In the horror

of your noisy dominance

slicing through my peace

with such awesome destruction.

 

26/08/12

Reviews

[Nicky Sarti]

What can I say ~ didn't I say it before anyways?

[John McFadyen]

Hi Nicky you talking 'plane' again!?

[Nicky Sarti]

I try.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Enjoyed this very much....awesome destruction is a great way to end a action movie, let alone a poem.

[John McFadyen]

Thanks John. Action movies take more writing though! lol

[The Refined Poet]

I liked this poem. I can relate to the scene described of jets passing overhead. nice write.

[John McFadyen]

Yeah thanks, I was just recovering my hearing on a quiet, and for once, sunny afternoon when I though of this!

[Alex ExtremEnigma]

nice poetry , i liked it

[John McFadyen]

Hey such good reviews. many thanks.

[Alex ExtremEnigma]

sure , no problem