Warning!

Warning!

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Trolls are devious creatures!

"

Warning!

Evil is abroad.

I feel it in my water

and smell its stench

permeate

from the depth of hell.

I see its preaching

in the atmosphere

but it cannot be seen

because it creeps

around in the sewers

on its putrid belly.

So beware my friends

as you sup here

in this internet cafe,

be careful that your cappuccino

is not laced

with the poisonous

froth of hate.

 

25/04/15


© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen



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Oh this is spot on how evil always creeps ... Always too gutless to come out into the open face to face!
Such strong emotion in the word choice! Brilliant write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sereena.
Wow.I loved this one.Shows clearly the strong emotions.Well portrayed John!

Posted 2 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

Passion is a beauty and a curse! Many thanks Mirab
There is a mentality of some people, unfortunately, I have run across them way too often in real life, that they live on hate and controversy, they GET OFF on other's pain. These people are best frozen out, ignored, and left to stew in their own creations.

Posted 2 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

In this case he feeds off the chaos he creates and if he can isolate someone like he did Frieda he i.. read more
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I am so sorry John. It seems some parasites like to not only suck blood but to poison it too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I take it this and the troll poem are related? I don't think they're bad people (no one really is) they're just so, so insecure. Rather than confront this they take their misery online and try to bring everyone down to their level, safe under the veil of anonymity. They're the oldschool bully of the new world, though unlike schoolyard thugs it's so much easier to deny them what they want.

Posted 2 Years Ago


reminds me of the creature from the swamps, a nasty fellow!

Posted 2 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

Indeed, slimy! Thanks Andrew.
Hate.....it permeates every site it seems....and the poetry sites run rampant with it. Sorry you are dealing with the distasteful ones. Lydi*

Posted 2 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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