Let Me Hold You!

There is nothing to compare to closeness.

Let Me Hold You!

Take me to thy breasts,

the place where your sweet heart lies,

wherein beats true love.

 

10/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Love is expressed beautifully in this write John! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You indulge me sweet Lady! Many thanks.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...well, ok...only if you insist! ; ) ...and I couldn't ! [resist, that is! ]

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Couldn't? Tis a figurative phrase dear Kelly. Thank you...always.

[R Smith]

very well written John, love expressed so perfectly in this lovely poem :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Richard.

[wordman]

yes my darling, bring me to thy breasts

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oi stop being jealous!

[wordman]

i heard that in a bar lol when i used that line about the moon and stars lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey what can I say?

[Kelly Scheppers]

...good come back, John! Hey wordman!! ; )

[wordman]

hey kelly,what do you think about johns line?oh! it`s on another poem about moon and stars

[h d e rushin]

very, very, very lovely John....and thanks for sharing..dana

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Dana.

[ANTO]

John I think breast (singular) would suffice here in conveying the message and it has more of a connection to the old school, I feel.
All in all a fine romantic poem with depth that is partly obscured, I feel, by two jiggling breasts.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You dirty dog Anto! I like both lol. Thank you.

[ANTO]

Oh I don't doubt that for one second my hot blooded Celtic brother...lol
YVW

[fattycbreezy52]

Ohkay.........An amazing way of describing the love and the beloved who is as gorgeous as her main feminine attributes.Amazing!:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So glad you enjoyed FCB. Thank you!

[Willard Wells]

Very lovely John. Well done. Short verse with hopes of love forever. Thanks,

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Willard.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice words... the wording provided a perfect image. Good work :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Aaron.

[andrew mitchell]

Ok this is the exception to the rule with her singing as I read your write. Nice breasts and nice write of breasts close to the heart and if you don't care about the heart nice breasts anyway. A visual succulent piece my Scotty Laddie Of Lassies born pert!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am a sucker for the womanly form Andrew. many thanks!

[andrew mitchell]

So am I !! Makes the world go round lol searching in love for that woman so divine!!