Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Sometimes we meet people who affect us fundamentally but whom we cannot have.

"

Secrets

You lay breathless still

in the shadow of shadows

dripping with desire.

 

25/08/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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Wonderful use of words. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


a perfect haiku john,wonderful job

Posted 10 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

10 Months Ago

Thank you Ron, glad you enjoyed it.
Timing John - was the arrow that killed this particular C**k Robin and that's a hard thing to have to admit.
I truly relate to this as 'that which we only really know when we experience it.'

Posted 10 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

10 Months Ago

Indeedio Tony, you hit the victim on the head. Thanks old buddy lol!
Such a beautiful thought John. A matter of perspective.

Posted 10 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

10 Months Ago

Indeed sweet poetess. Many thank yous.
DIVYA

10 Months Ago

You are welcome

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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