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Eve's Seduction

Eve's Seduction

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Seduction is something the Devil does well.

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Eve's Seduction

Eve chose the serpent,

the promise of omniscience

too much to resist.


01/09/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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You pen seduction with such an insatiable flair, John...so good to read you again!

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much dear Kelly; missed you!
Somethings cannot be resist. Nice use of words. You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you John for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

Thanks Coyote
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome John.
Mankind is always a willing partner it would seem in self-destructive behaviours. The snake was no snake-oil salesman I bet.


Posted 11 Months Ago


all the good things in life is a sin,i wonder how we could resist

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

We don't Ron, That is the point lol. Many thanks.
As a woman, personally I DON'T like real snakes and fear them, still I'm intelligent and attractive my own way :) but have to say You did it with three lines didn't You? pulling that part inside each one of us, this part which made Earth, and can Earth continue being without the allure and seeking knowledge?

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

I don't think snakes are many people's cup of tea but I changed my opinion when handling several, in.. read more
Speaks so much about their innate curiosity. Speaking of seduction, the serpent's lure is stronger, more potent. Enjoyed and appreciated this write, dear John.

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

Ah yes and women are curious. What a boring world without such drive dear Divya. And the serpent is .. read more
DIVYA

11 Months Ago

It's a pleasure John. Always & always!
So many get drawn in, even today. Cleverly put. Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Months Ago

Indeed so Kitty, many thanks.
kitty

11 Months Ago

Most heartily welcome!

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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