Poetic Licence

To a friend, muse and long term adviser.

Poetic Licence

Beyond the stars are dreams,

beyond the dreams are ardent lovers.

Those who feel softness in the rain,

breath in the saltiness of sea spray

and new mown grass,

and rejoice.

Those who yearn for the softness

of ardass silk, voile and the touch

of willing skin on willing skin.

Those who listen to Diana Krall,

Norah Jones and Amy Winehouse

and hear every word and feel every note.

Those who long for the lingering look,

the first touch and deep delicious

enduring kisses.

The soft feathers of another's breath

upon their necks

and the thrill of surrender.

Those for whom romance

is a drug of choice

and poetic words the syringe

with which to administer

hope.

01/09/17

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem and I agree.
"Those who listen to Diana Krall,
Norah Jones and Amy Winehouse
and hear every word and feel every note."
The above ladies. Amazing voices. Some of my muses too. Writer's who love life and try to understand life. Never know peace. Some like Hemingway. Fell to a gun later. Your words gentle, kind and wonderful John. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome John.

[wordman]

love from the heavens,soft as silk

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thanks dear friend.

[lightsong]

Truth, I can write a page bout Your grand majestic heavenly poem here, how it embraces the levels of poetry and a poetic spirit in such an enchanting magical way, for those whom their blood flows with ink, can feel Your words, the essence of Your poem, without anything to say... I bow for You, Your pen, Your poetic essence.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Then I am truly humbled my lady and bow in thanks.

[Einstein Noodle]

mighty fine stuff ...your poem hooked me as soon as i got to beyond the stars are dreams and beyond the dreams are lovers .. what an elevating thought that inspires romance and emotion .. well done .. it has a very natural rhythm that is very musical actually ...love Diana Krall and Norah Jones and now must check out Amy (thank you) ... your words are words of seduction ... if i were much younger i would commit them to memory ... shameful i know ;)
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Who need memory these days with mobile phones, tablets and the internet lol. Many thanks Einstein.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha well ...as an old fart stuck in the 60's i barely make do with my PC ... even worse memory is a doggerel endeavor ;}

[Einstein Noodle]

but this poem is pretty darn good

[DIVYA]

Beyond the stars are dreams,
beyond the dreams are ardent lovers.

Beyond the ardent lovers is poetry from heaven full of such tenderness and passion. Appreciated so much John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you enjoyed it Divya, many thanks.