Fey, Fay and Faint

Fey, Fay and Faint

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

A beautiful thing love!

"

Fey, Fay and Faint

I long to feel the beat

of your beautiful heart,

encased in your sweet

and delicate chest,

as I cup your breasts

in giving hands.

The very heart that fuelled

the thoughts you've penned

that penetrated my soul

and stole my very freedom;

left me a prisoner

to your desires.

I yearn to smell the fragrance

of your hair, your skin

and the piquancy

of your arousal

as I hold you to me;

recalling all the words

that we have shared,

the hopes and dreams

that have burned

and endured,

and endured,

and endured,

and that have kept us so alive

for oh so many misty,

tear drenched moons.


14/09/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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love,it brings the best out of us ,loved the write

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Thank you Ron
that penetrated my soul
and stole my very freedom;
left me a prisoner...So deep!!! l like it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Thank you Mayistone.
Mayistone

2 Months Ago

You are welcome John!
Proper use of words and thoughts. Allowed the reader to feel and understand the pleasure of happy hands on perfect women. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote for reading and the generous comment.
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
oh to be in love forever ....sigh! ;) well said ..especially like the endured line repeated ...it is powerful to me ...and i think i read it just the way you would want it ... i appreciate the gentleness throughout and i also like that it is she that has penetrated .... his heart ... i think that is very suave and clever sir!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Thank you dear 'E' for appreciating this one.
I like the word choice here John. The desirous feel is really well conveyed. The end flourish is a masterclass in ending a poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

There's a strange orange disc in the sky John. Im frightened...lol
John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Ha you p***y!
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

meeeow - lmao

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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