Conversion

Conversion

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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The crowd goes wild!

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Conversion

Number ten steps up

looks intently, strikes ball clean,

straight between the posts!

 

22/09/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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Soccer! GOAL!!!! The words made me feel the excitement. Lydi**

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Ha almost! Tis Rugby Union. A much 'rounder' and more manly game. Many thanks Lydi.
Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

Aha, I should have guessed.
this could be a few different sports...football, hockey, soccer...nicely done senryu...

a clean shot of words.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

I get your meaning but not sure they all have number 10s (Fly Half) to stroke that ball. many thanks.. read more
How very novel J.
But is it a sporty senryu or a half-time haiku?


Posted 4 Weeks Ago



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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools. I have.. more..

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