Conversion

The crowd goes wild!

Conversion

Number ten steps up

looks intently, strikes ball clean,

straight between the posts!

 

22/09/17

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Soccer! GOAL!!!! The words made me feel the excitement. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha almost! Tis Rugby Union. A much 'rounder' and more manly game. Many thanks Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Aha, I should have guessed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this could be a few different sports...football, hockey, soccer...nicely done senryu...

a clean shot of words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I get your meaning but not sure they all have number 10s (Fly Half) to stroke that ball. many thanks Jacob.

[Tony Jordan]

How very novel J.
But is it a sporty senryu or a half-time haiku?