So

So

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Love is hard to find

"

So

Where would

I find arms

as gentle as yours?

Where would I find

lips as succulent,

skin so radiant,

breasts so sweet?

There is no poetry

so intoxicating

as yours.

This is the real thing!

 

17/10/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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:) such sweet surrender ..the simplicity is made gently powerful by the course of your words .. i like this a lot ... men (generally speaking) do have a difficult time yielding .. when it happens ..i think it is a sure sign of the "real thing" ... we are wanderers and conquerors at heart ... but completely defeated when Love strikes ;) ... one of my favorite songs:
https://youtu.be/7lp7FtJXp7k
we don't get enough credit for being good guys do we!? :) really like your poem
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sounds beautiful to me,love

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Ah indeed it is a blissful thing Ron. Many thanks
Beautiful. Perfect use of words for the glory of love. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

And thank you Coyote for your kind words
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
A glorious poem of love, John. When you find the real thing, hold on tight. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeed so Lydi. Many thanks.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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