:) such sweet surrender ..the simplicity is made gently powerful by the course of your words .. i like this a lot ... men (generally speaking) do have a difficult time yielding .. when it happens ..i think it is a sure sign of the "real thing" ... we are wanderers and conquerors at heart ... but completely defeated when Love strikes ;) ... one of my favorite songs:
https://youtu.be/7lp7FtJXp7k
we don't get enough credit for being good guys do we!? :) really like your poem
E.
Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..