Fantasy

Fantasy

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Fantasy

That black dagger,

blunted by the

bones it has chipped,

slices into my heart.

Punctures all hope,

deflates my lungs

and leaves my soul

in disarray.

Indeed my infidelity

in your cause

has me hung

drawn and quartered.

Yet I have no breath left,

all expended in

longing,

in yearning,

in waiting

for you.

 

26/10/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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torn asunder and rightly so that even his repentant heart brings no complete reconstruction .. visceral, emphatic and emotive from every aspect .. his and hers ... easy flow .. direct simple language but displays the complexities of love, betrayal and pain ... nice one says i!
E.
ps wonderful music...wish i spoke-a-dee language tho ;}

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Fine multi-media work, well done !

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

thank you so much Leslie
stab me slow,watch me bleed,is it my pain that you need ?

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

I think you get this one Ron, many thanks.
blunt dagger sliced your heart? What an irony?

well you had it coming...thank goodness it was blunt dagger!

Posted 2 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

2 Months Ago

Oh that hurt! Many thanks!
Mirror

2 Months Ago

lol,,, most welcome!

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Added on October 26, 2017
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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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