Drinking Games

Drinking Games

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

When the bee cannot resist the nectar

"

Drinking Games

Once

I hung among the stars,

drifting on a dreamscape

amid that cosy,

fluffed-up black blanket

of night,

where angels cavort

and hope is served

in copious cups of

dark sweet coffee nectar.

I floated there

in the warm mother's milk

of amniotic, life-giving

waters.

Across a universe

of suns

I drank you in,

savoured every drop

that I managed to squeeze

from stony

barren breasts.

You guarded your mysteries

so well,

internet firewalls

your stave.

But my desire was not slaked

that liquor, saline spiked

made me thirst

all the more,

but still I would sip

each drop

and more.

 

29/10/17


© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen



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every body hurts,every body cries,when you lose something that moves you

love the song,may write a poem from this inspiration

Posted 3 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

I would feel so privileged if you were inspired by my post. CHEERS Ron.
Diluting the swally should be a capital offence my friend !! There's no hell like offering the goods then coming up short.
I thought of a creamy pint of the black stuff - another cosy black blanket
Well penned matey!

Posted 3 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

Indeed and the velvet slips down in silky fashion. Cheers, bottoms up frae Mauritius
Tony Jordan

3 Months Ago

It doesn't travel well at all though - I've had some manky pints of Guinness abroad lol
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John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

Cheers Tony!
Beautiful song and honest word. You allowed the reader to feel and understand your thoughts. Thank you John for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote from sunny Mauritius
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are lucky and you are welcome.
what a delicious drink sir ...tripping on your imagery like watching "2001: A Space Odyssey" ...i love the closing ..like tequila eh!? ..yes...i step up to the bar for another read for sure
E.
ps. wonderful video choice ..the instrumentation for it is thrilling ..one of my favorite combinations ..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

are you really there?? i am so jealous .. ;)
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

Yup here for 18 nights.
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

lucky man ...i am sure you are and will enjoy the stay thoroughly ... peace and joy sir!
I love this because of the metaphors about drinking that are original and true to the comparisons!

Posted 3 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much Josie
Love and relationships set their own course, and sometimes never the twain shall meet...highly dramatic poetic rant here. Eloquent, classic language. Ethereal, maternal, wrathful, sensual, demeaning, unrequited tones waft through it all. Dark, self-destructive references. My advice would be to move on rather than torture self/others. Life is there for the living and time is so precious. Powerful write John!

Posted 3 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Months Ago

I could not argue Annette. Many thanks for such a sage review.
Annette Pisano Higley

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome John.

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John Alexander McFadyen

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