Remember Me

Remember Me

A Poem by Dara
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Re posting this poem in memory of the victims, the first responders, and their families whose lives were destroyed by the tragic events of 9-11-01.

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When you see the trees

remember me

as they shade you there

with their broad green leaves.

 

When you feel the rain

let it cool your skin

and think of me

as I was back then.

 

When you see the stars

in the bright night sky

make a wish

as you close your eyes.

 

A wish to keep

what we had found,

a love that was real

and so profound.


© 2017 Dara



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This is just beautiful. Both the sentiment expressed and the vehicle of its expression. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dara

2 Months Ago

I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. I just couldn't let the day go by without posting a tribute to th.. read more
i am glad that you choose to re-post this heartfelt tribute..that it points me to nature all around me i can offer up my thanks for those loves lost as they remain so meaningful in untimely death ..the cowardly murder of innocent people with complete disregard should never be forgotten .. and the rejoicing in those towers rebuilt...stronger and more resilient than ever ... i love your poem...reading is a blessing ...
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dara

2 Months Ago

Thank you for this very kind, heartfelt review my friend. You have such a way with words, the review.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

yes,,,i so agree with you!
......I have no words........my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dara

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I am so pleased my poem had this effect on you. When suffering such a great loss .. read more
A gentle if sadly poignant tribute to tragedy. Seems something we have to get used to with the combination of natural and man made disasters of recent years. So sad.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dara

2 Months Ago

It is so very sad and only seems to be getting worse. Trying to stay positive to keep hope alive. Th.. read more
Visiting the 9/11 Memorial is #1 on my bucket list, and your words are etched upon our hearts, just like the memory of that day!


Posted 2 Months Ago


Dara

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Kelly. I visited Ground Zero after most of the wreckage had been cleared. It was a.. read more
' When you see the stars ~ in the bright night sky ~
make a wish ~ as you close your eyes. '

Your sadly beautiful words pay such a sincere and gentle tribute to those who died on 9/11.

Posted 2 Months Ago


emmajoy

2 Months Ago

We all share laughs, we should all share tears.. don't you think. x
Dara

2 Months Ago

Most definitely, sharing the load makes it so much lighter.....
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