so so so sad but beautifully told love that is real does not leave it is eternal
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
You are so right. I believe my mother is just marking time now. She is a trooper though and surround.. read moreYou are so right. I believe my mother is just marking time now. She is a trooper though and surrounded by loving friends and family. Thank you so much for your kind words.
If i could, would say someth ing but would be trite.. Tis beautiful s adness all the way th ough, Dara
'.my love for you will never die'
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Emma. Yes, that line says it all and one that we hear over and over. In my parent.. read moreThank you so much, Emma. Yes, that line says it all and one that we hear over and over. In my parents case they met very young and I believe it was meant to be. Hope all is well with you.
5 Years Ago
How lovely is that. Things are fine as can be, thank you, dear lady. See>>>> :)
Heartwrenching sadness in this one. When a couple has been married over 40 or 50 years, it is unbearable when one dies. It would be nice if they were reunited in another realm...and who knows? We will not know till we have traveled there. Beautifully written, Dara. Great rhyming. Lydi**
It is hard to imagine the pain of such a separation. Yet, in some ways my mother feels he hasn't lef.. read moreIt is hard to imagine the pain of such a separation. Yet, in some ways my mother feels he hasn't left her. She is 90 years old and I like to think his spirit is lingering, waiting for her to join him. Thank you so much, Lydi.
5 Years Ago
Your mom is fortunate she has such strong beliefs. I hope she is with you for many more years, thou.. read moreYour mom is fortunate she has such strong beliefs. I hope she is with you for many more years, though!
Lots of affection in this poem. Death is so feared by us all, yet it is the most natural thing (everyone does it eventually!!!!). I think the beautiful sentiments, and the acceptance of 'the other side' make this a gentle, and heart-warming Poem.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you so much for sharing your very kind, insightful thoughts about my poem. It is all such a my.. read moreThank you so much for sharing your very kind, insightful thoughts about my poem. It is all such a mystery too and one that requires a lot of faith.
A poet (whose name I have forgotten) once wrote :
'God moves in mysterious ways, His Wonders.. read moreA poet (whose name I have forgotten) once wrote :
'God moves in mysterious ways, His Wonders to perform.' I don't think our human brains are able to comprehend everything, so it is just as well we don't! And, although I don't like 'muddles' I do rather like 'mysteries'.!!!!!!
I have yet to reach this painful part of life where one very close has departed but i do dread the day it comes. I just hope i can handle the circumstance as gracefully as your Father did.
This is a very moving, beautifully written and constructed tribute. Very well done.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
The actual event seems almost surreal now when I look back on it but the finality of it is staggerin.. read moreThe actual event seems almost surreal now when I look back on it but the finality of it is staggering and sadly, one that we all must go through eventually. Here is hoping you will not be faced with it for many many years to come. Thank you so much for this very special review.
Hi Dara, im newon site just reading some of your writes, this was lovely ,what a great tribute to your parents, my dad was taken at a young age and my first ever poem wasdedicated to him. .You expresses so well. I will be reading some more.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your warm review. I would love to see your first poem about your dad sometime... read moreThank you so much for your warm review. I would love to see your first poem about your dad sometime. Welcome to the WC :-)
Your words put it so well. Love is a beautiful thing but in the end we cannot avoid the sadness whe.. read more Your words put it so well. Love is a beautiful thing but in the end we cannot avoid the sadness when one partner must leave. Great to see you here :-)
6 Years Ago
Selfishly I hope the old reaper will collect me before my good lady wife's as she'll cope so much mo.. read moreSelfishly I hope the old reaper will collect me before my good lady wife's as she'll cope so much more better than I would if she popped her clogs first. My life for the last 27 years has been built on the foundation that is her love.
6 Years Ago
Funny, it does seem to go that way more often than not but hopefully you both will have another 27 y.. read moreFunny, it does seem to go that way more often than not but hopefully you both will have another 27 years and much more to go. Sounds like a beautiful foundation as well!
well done Dara! i spent a lot of time with my parents when they were alive and was so fortunate to have been with them at their deaths ....there is a beauty and grace in death .. you describe it so well through the love and caring your parents shared their whole loves long ... my Da's coming up on his Birthday and his Death day soon....so he has been on my heart and mind anyway ... i love your poem! thank you for sharing it!
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I was so touched when I saw them say good bye and very sad for my mom. But, like you was able to be .. read moreI was so touched when I saw them say good bye and very sad for my mom. But, like you was able to be at my dad's bedside when he passed. It is something you never forget. Writing it down adds to the closure. As always such a joy to see you here my friend!
6 Years Ago
so nice your door is always open ;) ... yes..we will not forget to be sure.... i have not thought ab.. read moreso nice your door is always open ;) ... yes..we will not forget to be sure.... i have not thought about closure in the deaths of my parents now that you mention it ...seems like a pathway always open for me...perhaps it is time :(
6 Years Ago
Closure is not easy because you still miss them dearly. I like to write about my feelings though. Wr.. read moreClosure is not easy because you still miss them dearly. I like to write about my feelings though. Writing is like therapy to me. And my door is always open to you my friend ;-) May your memories of your parents give you comfort, especially now as your father's birthday and anniversary of his passing are looming. Take care!
Both my parents were taken young, so they were never afforded the pleasure of their golden years. How wonderful to see it with absolute clarity, after reading this. And what a comfort it must be for you, now!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I am so sorry to hear about your parents, Kelly. To lose them so young must have been very difficult.. read moreI am so sorry to hear about your parents, Kelly. To lose them so young must have been very difficult. Yes it is comforting know and to have heard them both acknowledge what a wonderful life they had together. To this day my mother still feels his presence. I like to think he is waiting for her. Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..