being a soldier brings a sense of belonging....great risk, but shared.
"On the bloody morning after, one-tin soldier rides away"
great piece, Dara....and being in war, those who fight, hope to live to tell those tales.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
To risk so much for so little given in return. Thank you Jacob. Your thoughts and opinions mean a gr.. read moreTo risk so much for so little given in return. Thank you Jacob. Your thoughts and opinions mean a great deal to me. I hope you are doing well.
In such trying, dangerous times those soldiers fortunate enough to have survived conflict, their comradery a cohesive friendship that even many years later, still they are ' as thick as thieves ' including their dearly departed comerades!
Inspiring
Posted 6 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Yes, my father often talked about his time in the Navy as if it were yesterday. They knew their caus.. read moreYes, my father often talked about his time in the Navy as if it were yesterday. They knew their cause was just and shared so much pride, deservedly so. Thank you for your thoughts and presence here. I hope you have a wonderful day!
Interesting military theme. Enjoyed reading your poem 😊
Posted 6 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Thank you very much. It is nice to see you here. I will look forward to reading your work as well. T.. read moreThank you very much. It is nice to see you here. I will look forward to reading your work as well. Take care!
Your poem is a moving tribute to the bravery and sacrifice of American soldiers, and the way that their stories continue to inspire and move us even after all these years. The way that you describe the veterans as "gallant, elderly gentlemen" is a reminder that they were once young men who risked their lives for their country, and that their valor and courage should never be forgotten. The lines "Paying tribute to the ones who died, long buried but not forgotten, eyes welling up with salty tears, they raise their hands to salute them" are particularly poignant, as they suggest that the veterans are still deeply moved by the memory of their fallen comrades, and that their sacrifices continue to inspire us all. Overall, I think your poem is a powerful testament to the enduring legacy of America's soldiers, and a reminder that their stories will always be a source of inspiration and pride for our nation.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
Many thanks for your wonderful review which in itself is a great tribute to our soldiers past and pr.. read moreMany thanks for your wonderful review which in itself is a great tribute to our soldiers past and present. I so appreciate you being here!
This is inspiring and shows wonderful appreciation. Thank you for these sweet words.
Posted 10 Months Ago
10 Months Ago
Thank you so much! It’s a small gesture for such huge sacrifices. Praying for troops in present ti.. read moreThank you so much! It’s a small gesture for such huge sacrifices. Praying for troops in present time and their families who also sacrifice so much.
And if I may say so not just American soldiers. What a beautiful tribute that brought a lump to my throat.
Wonderfully structured and ablaze with what is right.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you this touching review. Yes, I can see soldiers from around the world reminiscing in groups .. read moreThank you this touching review. Yes, I can see soldiers from around the world reminiscing in groups reliving it all. My brother-in- law was in Viet Nam, a different war all together but my admiration for him abounds just the same. It’s great to see you here. Take care!
I am a retired teacher who has just recently discovered the joy of writing poetry. Formerly known as Passion Flower, I decided to publish using my own name. My poetry is simple and from the heart whi.. more..