Your Love

Your Love

A Poem by Dara


Treading softly I meandered

through the chambers

of your heart,

whispering words of love

so tenderly

letting my thoughts to you

impart.

To hear you say “I love you”  

was sweet music to my ears

erasing all the loneliness

and pain

 from all these years.

Your love provided a cushion

for my heart with every beat

and offered relief and comfort

like moss beneath

my feet.

© 2019 Dara


Author's Note

Dara
An older poem with a few changes.

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' Treading softly I meandered ~ through the chambers ~ of your heart, ~ whispering.. .. '

Such gently expressed and genuine words, no side swipes at what love can be - perhaps should be. There's a sordid need to knock Romance these days, to mock those red roses around the door, etc. . How sad is that... unlike your poem which makes me smile into a dreary Monday!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dara

5 Years Ago

I am so glad my words brought a smile to your face dear Emma. Afraid I am one of the incurable roman.. read more
This reminded me of the very first time my husband told me he loved me. It seemed like only yesterday when I read this. Thank you for the beautiful reminder, Dara!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dara

5 Years Ago

What a beautiful love story, Kelly. How wonderful to have such memories as that. Thank you for your .. read more
To hear you say “I love you”
was sweet music to my ears
erasing all the loneliness
and pain

Sometimes these words are enough....sometimes....making us feel those words is more important than saying it.... :)
Just realised the difference .

While waiting to hear those words...:))

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dara

5 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this 'this thing called love' and I couldn't agree with yo.. read more
Ardra

5 Years Ago

Ah ...I understand that so well....the aftermath....is something altogether....:)

Tha.. read more

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Added on September 9, 2018
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Dara
Dara

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