Sweet Thang

Sweet Thang

A Poem by Dara

With pouty red lips
and bright blue eyes
she has a style that attracts
 and can hypnotize.

Men fall at her feet,
get weak in the knees
as she walks down the street
swaying hips that tease.

With her head held high
and hair blowin' in the wind
she’s every man’s dream
of a sweet young thing.


© 2019 Dara


Author's Note

Dara
Just for fun remembering the good ol' days ;-)

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She's still vibrantly alive,
I can feel it!
Full of verve and vive …
don't conceal it!

Indeed, strut your stuff,
tease the guys …
you've plenty enough
to get a big rise. ; )

Sorry, Dara Dear,
I was reading your sassy poem, glancin' at your lovely profile pic … 'n got boldly inspired.
Hope you didn't mind a frisky lil' flirt! 😏

Love your wee bit of naughtiness in this well-struck little teaser, and a pretty darned good poem in imagery and flow … stirring our senses jussst right!
Great rhymes and swaying rhythm, too, until that last verse, eh(?), which got me to thinking, and what I thunk was:

With hair blowin' in the wind
head held high as she sang
she’s every man’s dream
of a sweet young thang.

Whatever, I love it (obviously), and you certainly got a good rise outta Me … LOL!
Good stuff, Lovely Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃


(psst! love the sizzlin' picture, too)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dara

4 Years Ago

Well! You have me grinning from ear to ear :-) There is nothing better than to know that one’s poe.. read more
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Dara,
You're a class act! 🌸
Dara

4 Years Ago

Awww thank you!
A great poem love the flow and meaning love it 😊

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dara

4 Years Ago

Many thanks and so happy you enjoyed it!
A delightful piece of writing, Dara - and somehow, gently personal! Hope you wear those good ol' days at times, must never lose them, dear, dear you!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Dara

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear Emma! Every now and then I can fill a certain stirring of that young woman making her.. read more
oh and she is just lovin' the attention...

I like the title..."Sweet Thang" gives me that southern belle feel...Scarlett O'Hara...
fun read.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dara

4 Years Ago

Most definitely loving it! :-) although I was always pretty shy when it came to attention from the o.. read more
A beautiful lady can tempt the men if she wants. Nice use of word dear Dara. Made me believe. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dara

4 Years Ago

To be sure I was always very shy but it was fun to fantasize being the 'temptress' :-) Great of you .. read more

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Added on April 11, 2019
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Dara
Dara

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