Crazy as a Fox

Crazy as a Fox

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Sleeping in a meadow of flowers

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Wandering carefree through sunshine beams 
brushing against flowers embracing the day 
wanting to find the scent of easy prey... 

When night falls and passion pursues the moon 
the longing will play a familiar tune of Claire de lune 
as I guide you to my seaside private cave... 

Whereas the stars shine sweetly over the soft 
waves of the windswept sea where once 
your ship had anchored in the cove of love... 

I have found my purpose of being here 
with the scent of summer rain and love's gain 
clinging to Midsummer's dream that you will stay

© 2018 Patricia Wedel


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I am so happy that this appeared in the right list on my page, that's something different and SO sweet from You my dear., delightful so delightful to read and enjoy.... playful, crazy as a fox... oh yes! I can be that too, wanting only to jump here and there carefree, and please see my photo here,

https://www.writerscafe.org/RSong/photos/21.November.2021/226699/



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Song of Light... I adore your review... jumping right in... Crazy like a Fox... is a favorite e.. read more



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I am so happy that this appeared in the right list on my page, that's something different and SO sweet from You my dear., delightful so delightful to read and enjoy.... playful, crazy as a fox... oh yes! I can be that too, wanting only to jump here and there carefree, and please see my photo here,

https://www.writerscafe.org/RSong/photos/21.November.2021/226699/



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Song of Light... I adore your review... jumping right in... Crazy like a Fox... is a favorite e.. read more
Whereas the stars shine sweetly over the soft
waves of the windswept sea where once
your ship had anchored in the cove of love...

I have found my purpose of being here
with the scent of summer rain and love's gain
clinging to Midsummer's dream that you will stay

I REALLY LOVE This part of your write, This is so wonderful and beautiful.
I enjoyed this write

Posted 5 Years Ago


When ...passion pursues the moon... best line ever. That is a title of a movie, a caption for a photo, the name for our new perfume.
Wonderful piece of writing


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Cherrie.... thanks for your purrrfect review... the Red Fox 🦊 is sometimes forgotten, but I .. read more
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

We use to have a mom who would bring here kits up to the yard. She brought them at night and they wo.. read more
Well done. Like this one.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful- can just about smell the fresh salty air and see the beauty of the flowers in the fresh salt air- romantic at its best- always wishing in love one can never go wrong 🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Kelly... I appreciate your thoughts on romantic interludes by windswept waves of emotion as nat.. read more
A sweet romantic poem of passion and longing with the moonlit night and an intimate cave holding infinite possibilities for lovers of the night.

A sensual write, Patricia.

Cheers!
M.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Mallika... your review is lovely as the quiet gentleness of the morning tide when nature reside.. read more
Now how crazy can love possibly be.. incredibly crazy, if you ask me.... There is a sweet saltiness here too Pat if I'm not mistaken..... Neville

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Neville ... a sweet saltiness and a bit of naughtiness... always a pleasure to read your review.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

always a pleasure to give them to you... Neville x
mm dreamy, sultry wistful longing ... risky to be in love with a mariner ;) strong rhythm .. i like the tight tercet form ... the language creates freedom within that structure ... the change up in rhyme doesn't break the flow at all for me ... perhaps that is part of the free feel i get in reading .. glad i stopped and found this one Pat!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear E... your astute playful review has been a blessing today. I suppose life could have been simi.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:)..................
Different people see different things in the same image. As no one else has noted the sexual imagery in verses two and three, it could mean I am just a dirty old man. Whatever the case, this one is beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear John... do we innately breathe moments of passion when seaside waves provide passion in exquisi.. read more
Wow romantic appealing and soo beautiful ! "Claire de lune, aha wow that and more in your poem delights my lunar lover heart. Awesome poetic rhythm and fabulous word choice and metaphor crafted. Kudos.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear Kamoonpury... your lover lunar heart is vulnerable to the music of the sea. Thank you for
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Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your review that I have placed with my treasures found at sea. truly, Pat

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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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