Contour

Contour

A Poem by Patrick Schultz
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Moments before lovemaking

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As I lie next to you 
I run the tips of my fingers
Along the contour of your body
Tracing message only your skin 
Would accept
One only your skin would fold to
I spell the name of the thing you embody and you smile holding onto me 
Like fervent prayer
And I fall into your comfort  
Spelt 
H-O-M-E

© 2017 Patrick Schultz


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Patrick Schultz
for someone special

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This short poem has it all; it's sweet, sexy, image filled and comforting. Nice job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patrick Schultz

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Simple and cute, i am learning to write something good as this .

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patrick Schultz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much man. I think it's just okay but thank you.
This is sooooo beautiful. I could read this infinitely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patrick Schultz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so so much :)
Are there any new chapters for your novel?
kaylahardy120

7 Years Ago

You are so welcome! And Yes! I just posted chapter 9 last night! (:
I love seeing poems like this, on love and the purity of the intentions of humans. This poem makes me feel warm

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patrick Schultz

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I hope it continues to make you feel warm. Love is a language we all s.. read more

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Added on February 10, 2017
Last Updated on February 10, 2017
Tags: Love, Romance, Heartbreak, Intimacy, Lovers, Romantic

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Patrick Schultz
Patrick Schultz

Barbados



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