Bon Apetite

Bon Apetite

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

What is that lying on your plate
That bloody pulsing thing-
Oh, that's my heart

Tell me, how do you like it?
You may need to add salt
It is bland I am sure

What do you taste, tell me-
Can you taste the sadness
The heartache, loneliness

I mean it is apparent
See- you put it all there- you
I gave you my heart and

You chewed it up
Spit it out like flavorless gum
Tossed it away like used kleenex

So... please,
Enjoy, eat up-
Bon Apetite


© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe



Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
UGH .. not so good .. i wrote this so long ago .. lost it .. the first one was better , a little , but see, i forgot it and started over .

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This is very cool. It is a good one. Don't lose it. lol
It's prose, it's clear, it's conversational, it's speaks it's message. I can just imagine the eyes delivering this message.
Good write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


i always love what you write becoz i can feel your passion...its naked and its pulsating.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Do you feel your poems need to rhyme or fit into a format? your very hard on your writing and that is okay but not deserved still. If you were to read this to people with the same passion and conviction you had writing it, they would love it. It is a desert served cold to a past lover who deserves such treats to remind them of what they have done. Too many people chew up a heart and discard it with little regards to anyone. I like this poem it is one I wish to share with another as well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


it just tastes like blood. and veins. and such. if i ate it. probably need a lot of salt.
but i'm a vegetarian
a very unique, great write.

(oh, i just read your review. i didn't know this poem wasn't literal )

Posted 6 Years Ago


not literally eating a human heart of course.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh my i would better refuse this dish, no matter how much its seasoned, i wouldn't be cruel to eat a human heart....

Posted 6 Years Ago


haha!!.. that is so different.. very deep kind of thought and contrast to the title.. great write

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is wonderful! I think it's amazing, personally. : ) veryy well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I still think it's good! Nice image and strong point you're making:D

Posted 6 Years Ago


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it is good!! I had the same thing today, you can never rewrite the same poem as it was! so annoying haha but this is great, I like the images, it's straight in your face!! nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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