No Master Peace

No Master Peace

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Much to my chagrin
And I say this with 
A shy grin...
I have not written my master piece 
No, the Master peace is not yet attained 

Much to my dismay
Even though I would never
Dis May my writing is 
Stifled (but not stiff)
Smothered (without gravy) 

Sad to say this Monday
Can't trust that day..
My writing is 
Sad (with sniffles)
Bad (not like Michael Jackson bad)
Pathetically unpoetic (un-correct)

Much to my chagrin 
No master peace
For me or you...

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe

Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
quick quack play on words.. much to my dismay unpoetically incorrect
just popped into my head here at manage / add writing .. does it show? LoL!
Seriously, no my name isn't Shirley please don't call me that!- but in all honesty- this sucks!

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Written like old rhyme stories for kids. It had a cat in the hat/ shel silverstein feel. It made me smile :))

Posted 7 Years Ago

You are very creative with your words

Posted 7 Years Ago

Your playful words have made me smile, your words make me feel like a kid again and I want to go outside and play.
A great title!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Excellent Chloe. I think when we do finally write it.........we will stop writing because we will no longer be here to write.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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LOL..seriously clever!

Posted 7 Years Ago

This was truly a dancing play on words. I read and wove through your thoughts, smiling and looking forward to more!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I nice play around with words, it's fun and brings a smile. Well done =D

Posted 7 Years Ago

Funny and cute write Chloe. I understand this...

Posted 7 Years Ago

LOL we all want to write the divinely inspired piece the work that says we have arrived I too am that way I want to look and say this is the best

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2011
Last Updated on March 28, 2011


Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR

Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..