Chocolate Truffles

Chocolate Truffles

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Would you dream a dream with me
Close your eyes - and we are
Dancing together beneath silver stars
The music slow , sweet and dreamy
Our bodies fit like black gloves
On a movie starlet
We sing our own song
The music is inside us now
Beautiful , like your eyes
Your lips drip honey
Like a bee I have to taste
Sweeter than chocolate truffles
Lips collide drinking in the flavor
Passion flares
Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again
Dance me to the cosmic constellations
We will catch a ride on a comet's tail
As we dream this dream together
Would that this dream last forever

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


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The imagery of "Kiss me soft like black velvet" is simply divine! I could feel that line! "Our bodies fit like black gloves on a movie starlet" not only is the imagery splendid, but the simile is so appropos. Oh, yes, who would not want to have this romantic fantasy filled with desire and soft sensuality...and even sprinkled with celestial beauty? Chloe, this is fantastic! Bravo! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


gorgeous piece of writing(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chloe..Across the Universe

10 Years Ago

Lillie thank you so much
Fantastic and musical piece, Chloe. Fine writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chloe..Across the Universe

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Pryde
How beautifully descriptive this is! Would you dream a dream with me?! What a fantastical line! Chloe, this is so sweet and romantic it makes my heart melt in its tenderness! Such a stunning poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Came back to taste, favorite ~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, I love the way the music "is inside us now", in your words I see a love so great it becomes part of the cosmic dance, part of nature itself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Softly sensual w/ just the right amount of raw passion, heightening our senses... 'Kiss me soft like black velvet/ Kiss me hard, violet violence/ Hold me close/ Kiss me again and again...' Gentle yet Rough...Loving yet passionate... Also great is dancing to the cosmic constellations... Sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


kiss me soft like black velvet.........delicious!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the last two lines especially and the title too..this was sensual filled with vibrant colors and warmth..beautifully done...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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