Chocolate Truffles

Chocolate Truffles

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Would you dream a dream with me
Close your eyes - and we are
Dancing together beneath silver stars
The music slow , sweet and dreamy
Our bodies fit like black gloves
On a movie starlet
We sing our own song
The music is inside us now
Beautiful , like your eyes
Your lips drip honey
Like a bee I have to taste
Sweeter than chocolate truffles
Lips collide drinking in the flavor
Passion flares
Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again
Dance me to the cosmic constellations
We will catch a ride on a comet's tail
As we dream this dream together
Would that this dream last forever

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


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How could i not read a poem called Chocolate Truffles! There is such an elegance in your words.. dancing in the beauty of the moment.. Yes.. how sweet the lips of the one you love.. Passionate and profound.. We all need to find a dream that lasts a lifetime.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Plainly sensual and erotically charge without being vulgar, well written and plausible flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I like the use of colour and taste to describe the sensual journey..lovely

Posted 12 Years Ago


velvet imagery moves beautifully down the page~opening to lovely dreams petal by petal~

Posted 12 Years Ago


You know that I am a dreamer, you knew I would like this poem....:-)
But remember, I have two left feet, watch your toes in the dance part of the poem...lol

The poem is sensual, passionet, and feminine-beautiful.
I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh, this makes me dream of someone . . . sweet dreams

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love your comparisons to things, soft like black velvet etc. Well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


My screen looks like a heat wave
with a dreamlike desert mirage

"Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again"

You have made the temperature rise
across the universe, with this exciting
and sweet to taste poetry...

Rossen

Posted 12 Years Ago


Listen to you my friend, writing all sensual and romantically. I am going to call you the lady of dreams because your dreams are about unity of all or the most romantic dreams known to us. I love your cosmic dance around the stars and on the tail of the milky way, who would ever pass up a dream like this? Wonderful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chocolate truffles, black velvet...cosmic constellations dancing....just lovely, and among my "enjoys"! I love the lines,

We sing our own song
The music is inside us now

With such a combination, the music should always be as this!!
Another nice write!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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