Chocolate Truffles

Would you dream a dream with me
Close your eyes - and we are
Dancing together beneath silver stars
The music slow , sweet and dreamy
Our bodies fit like black gloves
On a movie starlet
We sing our own song
The music is inside us now
Beautiful , like your eyes
Your lips drip honey
Like a bee I have to taste
Sweeter than chocolate truffles
Lips collide drinking in the flavor
Passion flares
Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again
Dance me to the cosmic constellations
We will catch a ride on a comet's tail
As we dream this dream together
Would that this dream last forever

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

velvet imagery moves beautifully down the page~opening to lovely dreams petal by petal~

[ice]

You know that I am a dreamer, you knew I would like this poem....:-)
But remember, I have two left feet, watch your toes in the dance part of the poem...lol

The poem is sensual, passionet, and feminine-beautiful.
I enjoyed reading it.

[Emily Burns]

oh, this makes me dream of someone . . . sweet dreams

[Kyla H]

I love your comparisons to things, soft like black velvet etc. Well written!

[Rossen]

My screen looks like a heat wave
with a dreamlike desert mirage

"Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again"

You have made the temperature rise
across the universe, with this exciting
and sweet to taste poetry...

Rossen

[SpokenWord]

Listen to you my friend, writing all sensual and romantically. I am going to call you the lady of dreams because your dreams are about unity of all or the most romantic dreams known to us. I love your cosmic dance around the stars and on the tail of the milky way, who would ever pass up a dream like this? Wonderful write.

[Sheila Kline]

Chocolate truffles, black velvet...cosmic constellations dancing....just lovely, and among my "enjoys"! I love the lines,

We sing our own song
The music is inside us now

With such a combination, the music should always be as this!!
Another nice write!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is what I call the dream of a lifetime.
Love and lust make the greatest combination.

[Jibey]

Lovely dreamy poem, using the image of the rich, sweet chocolate well to conjure up a feeling of delight and fusion, of sensual pleasures and the prospect of orgasm...