Crawl to Me

Come to me baby
down on your knees
oh baby I love it when you crawl

Crawl to me
oh, baby , baby

Watch me as I sway
just for you baby , only you
dripping honey you make me

Wanna go down , oh baby
just can't leave you now

Watch me as I sway
oh baby we got all day
make me wanna stay

Honey , sweet
no way am I walkin' out that door

Crawl to me
oh baby , crawl
you make me wanna stay

Oh baby we can play all day
games no one else would play

Come to me baby
come to me now
oh baby baby you make me

Wanna crawl
I wanna crawl to you, just you

Crawl to me baby
let the honey drip
oh sweet baby taste it on your lips

Crawl oh baby, baby crawl
Scream it, scream it out loud

Baby baby you you you
crawl to me make my honey drip
sway with me baby , stay with me baby

Crawl , crawl, crawl on your
knees to me -to me- to me
oh baby love keeps flowin '

Love you baby baby baby
oh baby, you, you, you
make me wanna

Author's Note

Well now - you may wonder what this is all about and you may say this is one suck ass poem - actually it is lyrics or poem inspired by Led Zepplin's song 'You Make Wanna Crawl"- I think i wrote this wrong for the contest .. said write how it makes you feel .. i don't know about this ... is it an embarrassment? Truthful opinions - i can take it on the chin
If you know it or listen it is so so so sexy - voice and guitar makes you wanna crawl lol
I ain't no song writer .. my shot for the contest -anything with music i'm in ..

Reviews

[Daring Darling Didi]

Quite seductive lyrics, I must say! Such a fabulous song as well.

[Michael X]

lyrical delight, the sensuous wanting flows like a lulling brook, ever sparkling each time desire reflect in the sunlight, the quality is read and felt and
heard in the heart. beautiful and dreamy work.

[Octob3r Star]

Very awesome, thanks :)

[Philip Smith]

I'm a big Led Head and see it in your poem, you should write songs. I come from the land of ice and snow (Canada). I could picture Plant singing this.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love it, found myself grooving to the beat of these well written lyrics!

[J.V. Stanley]

Outstanding...I enjoyed it and it had a lot of sexual connotations within it, quite a seductive piece. I've never actually listened to Led Zepplin (I live a sheltered life) but I think its awesome.

[Star]

i absolutely love Led Zepplin and they are my all time fave classic rock band... right on sister!!! This is very lyrical and it s very sexy song I think....I am like you I love music to no end and I like to write poetry as if it were sung sometimes myself

[Daniel88Batson]

Really good!
Did you intend to make sexual overtones? If so. wow. lol
If not... I'm wierd lol!

[Rossen]

Music to my ears~

[Tommy]

I think it work great in a seductive tone…I could hear it singing a bit in my head…I think the reputation works well, and the rhyme played into the flow…It works for me…Kinda’ Hot Chloe!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy