Ouija Vu

Ouija Vu

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

I hit the ground running
Feet flat on the clouds
As fast as Mercury
With broken wings
Light as an elephant
Heavy as a feather
Where's the ouija board
Deja vu
Deja vu
Day- light view
Not needed whispered
Purple dragonfly dressed in rags
Not needed butterfly
Dressed in silk hummed
Cloud-light shining brightly in my eyes
Blinding me
Seeing eye dog ahead
On a one-dollar bill
Follow me he said
A message I have
Ouija board ?
Deja vu
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious  sent me
Skimming the earth
Message inside
For better
Or worse
First or last
Now or later
Forever
Until the next
Deja vu
Deja vu
Orange light flashes
Shivering neon
Message must wait
Today's not the day

© 2012 Chloe..Across the Universe



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too long i have waited to see you here...missed these impactful and profoundly deep writes of yours.this is excellent and resonates with surrealism and emotional fauvism. superb poetry .

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chloe..Across the Universe

4 Years Ago

quinnfinn, thanks so very much :) I will come see you soon .
simply amazing! beautiful poem and gorgeous ways of telling such drama

Posted 4 Years Ago


that is such an awesome title. very clever

Posted 4 Years Ago


haven't i read this before? oh wait...damn you deja deja deja vu! you won't get the best of me next time haha!

Posted 4 Years Ago


beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


luvly

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love the flow, rhythm and repetition. You achieve (and beautifully I must say) a kind of stream-of-consciousness that I aim for in much of my writing. I'll be checking out the rest of your writing when I get a chance.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nice word play, but my favorite part about this poem is the rhythm. I like the way it sounds and feels in my head and when I read it out loud, its music.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I thought this was cool. I love the mixture of words and different ideas. It sort of paints a running thoughts type situation. It has a very controlled chaos sort of feel to it and I find it easy to relate since the description is general and the meaning is heavily encoded. Pretty bad-a*s.

Posted 5 Years Ago


That was a neat play with words! Ver well thought. Not my favorite form, but I liked the concept for sure.
Be well

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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