Ouija Vu

Ouija Vu

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

I hit the ground running
Feet flat on the clouds
As fast as Mercury
With broken wings
Light as an elephant
Heavy as a feather
Where's the ouija board
Deja vu
Deja vu
Day- light view
Not needed whispered
Purple dragonfly dressed in rags
Not needed butterfly
Dressed in silk hummed
Cloud-light shining brightly in my eyes
Blinding me
Seeing eye dog ahead
On a one-dollar bill
Follow me he said
A message I have
Ouija board ?
Deja vu
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious  sent me
Skimming the earth
Message inside
For better
Or worse
First or last
Now or later
Forever
Until the next
Deja vu
Deja vu
Orange light flashes
Shivering neon
Message must wait
Today's not the day

© 2012 Chloe..Across the Universe



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Great imagery. Loved it

Posted 5 Years Ago


make a great song.....imaginative and obscure

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mystical, elegant.
The wording and the beat adds to the feeling
Of magic.
I like it.
Keep writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your way with words makes the reader immediately fall into the poetry and it doesn't let them go until the poem is over.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deja Vu can be a creepy feeling. I love the mysterious feel of this poem. You have captured the mystery and eeriness of the unknown

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your title intrigued me and your similes left me smiling. Fantastic

Posted 5 Years Ago


clever, snappy and brilliant word play.. I wouldn't expect anything else from you :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love the title your play on words and the flow .light as an elephant heavy as a feather, great lines the thinking persons poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love the imagery in this one.
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious sent me
Skimming the earth

You are such a talented writer. The flow and rhyme scheme pours so smoothly from the challis of your imagination, you take the reader on a dreamish trip through mindscapes pregnant with symbolism and brimming with ingenious invention. I like it. =)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really like this poem, your rhymes are amazing and so is your vocabulary. The style is really great. It flows very well. I like when you said light as an elephant and heavy as a feather ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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