Ouija Vu

Ouija Vu

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

I hit the ground running
Feet flat on the clouds
As fast as Mercury
With broken wings
Light as an elephant
Heavy as a feather
Where's the ouija board
Deja vu
Deja vu
Day- light view
Not needed whispered
Purple dragonfly dressed in rags
Not needed butterfly
Dressed in silk hummed
Cloud-light shining brightly in my eyes
Blinding me
Seeing eye dog ahead
On a one-dollar bill
Follow me he said
A message I have
Ouija board ?
Deja vu
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious  sent me
Skimming the earth
Message inside
For better
Or worse
First or last
Now or later
Until the next
Deja vu
Deja vu
Orange light flashes
Shivering neon
Message must wait
Today's not the day

© 2012 Chloe..Across the Universe

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Enjoyed reading this fast n wild poetry!
glad to see you writing again miss Chloe~

Posted 6 Years Ago

the criss cross variants are thrilling!~ a spectacular heady roll on down the surreal avenue of thought pitter pats against the window panes of the quick lit mind!!~ love! the speed .....................whoosh!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Reading this got my head spinning...but in a good way! You hit on two controversial topics, Deja vu, and the Ouija board. Spiritually this is quite the mind trip...running through your words...trying to keep up at a heart thumping pace!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Quite interesting... to me the contrast of the poem are very symbolic of how we can cross our fantasies with reality till we are not sure where the line is.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Love the thoughts, the reverse ideas, the humor interjected into such serious thoughts -great play on words, and the overall message of "come what may, today's not the day"....message must wait
It is so good to have you back and writing again!!

Posted 6 Years Ago

I really like this! No joke! One of the best poems I have read today! And I have read a lot! Your a really talented writer, and I look forward to more!

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on March 31, 2012
Last Updated on March 31, 2012


Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR

Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..