Sway

shall we dance

Dance with me
please
hold me close
sway with me
bone to bone
arms around
waist
arms around
neck
sway

Let the music take us
to another
realm
just you
me
swaying

Not too close
when we are alone
then
we will fall into
each others skin

For now
just need you
holding me
dance me
and sway
with me

Stay

Author's Note

restoration .. my mind is numb so no poems or stories come .. they are sleeping

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

I can almost hear and feel the rhythm of the music in this one. I really love the inner thoughts of the speaker. The flirty way she's like come here, but not too close. Later. That's the way to control a man. Besides they love it when we take command like that. lol

Good read. :)

[Antonio Valentino]

Anytime Chloe, lets tear that dance floor up!

poems from sleepy numb minds are always the best, believe me, I know :))

Bone to bone... love that.

[Danielle Asher]

I totally agree with Blackbirdsong's review. I really did have a tune in my head while reading. Dancing is my favorite form of expression. It comes first to me even before writing, so I was able to feel this piece. Thanks! I always enjoy your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. Flowed like music. Thank you.
Coyote

[Jessi]

I like this it interestingly different and i love that And well written

[Fades]

Hey!! :) still as good as ever, This one was dreamy, kinda slow, smooth and sensual.. sounds like you :). Beautiful.

[Gunny]

I like it. Very unique and different. Very sensual and dream like. It caught and held my attention certinaly.

[Jenny Davis]

"we will fall into
each others skin".......Loved that image.

This is very beautiful and I could hear love's music in the background while reading this :)

[None]

Lovely, extremely powerful with perfect presentation. I can see the beauty, the movements, the looks, through your words. Great poem! Very expressive.

[Jeanie O'brien]

i can too, hear the rythem of the music in the poem , i like it

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This makes me want to dance. ;-)