The Final Goodbye

The Final Goodbye

A Poem by Paul Bell

She watched him sleeping, wondering

When did she stop loving him

Was it gradual

Did she ever love him

Could she love another

Her mind was made up

She would leave today

He watched her sleeping, wondering

Placing the pillow over her face

Did he ever love her.


© 2018 Paul Bell



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Now there lies a question...Blimey mate, brilliant write...................Neville

Posted 2 Months Ago


Paul Bell

2 Months Ago

Don't think she left him after all.
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Nor will she ever......
I do believe that he did love her very much. If he couldn't have her... he didn't want any one else to have her too ( he knew that she was going to leave him. God! I sound like Mexican drama.)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

I think he did.
Just a tad possessive the lad.
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Hopeless love can do that.
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Amy
This poem was very good. It has a sad and ominous feel to it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

It is rather final.
she got her freedom....maybe not as she expected to.

j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Yeah, I think he was a jealous guy.
Love is a tricky thing- to love and be loved can be just lust, to be inlove is love at the highest form- pillows don’t get to the root of the situation the answer lies in the heart- communication is best answer silence separates people not distance🌹interesting set here, nice twist🌹

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Cant disagree with that.
so many people get lust confused with love,loved the write

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Think this guy found something out.
 wordman

3 Months Ago

and many,many more
so sad, but as they say aside from love being a powerful emotion, it is also a variable, subject to change.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

Not a lot of change going on in this one.
sette

3 Months Ago

sorry to hear that
God you sure scare me Paul... lol am so glad am miles n miles away from you hehehe....
if she did want to leave... he should have let her go.. not this way.... i am sure going to have pillow night mares :P

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ardra

3 Months Ago

Mmm I better don't comment ...next thing I know you are sending me a postal bomb heheh
Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

You wouldn't cheat on me, would you.
Where did you get that designer baby. Looks nothing like.. read more
Ardra

3 Months Ago

Hahahhaha.... :p
Maybe the kid got swapped in the hospital...should sue them...
wow! what a corker sir ..so sudden and shocked by the turn...sure she was as well...man you do a fine job with so few lines...slam dunk says i! poor girl ;(
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul Bell

3 Months Ago

It sure turned around quick.

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