Paradise Cove

Paradise Cove

A Poem by Paul

Under the warm southern sky
Where a different world exists
A whole paradise lies,
I had to give her one last kiss

It was all like a dream
I didn't want to wake
So serene is this place
The feelings I had, were no mistake

Here I am now, home for a rest
Longing for more time,
The memories I have,
My heart beats strong in my chest

A new journey has started,
The destination, I don't yet know
But I shall meet you there,
Back in the paradise cove.

© 2017 Paul



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A poem full of optimistic hope. I hope he met her there, back in the paradise cove! The irregular and near rhymes seem fine to me... seem to add to the wimsyness! I enjoyed your well structured poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Thank you once again for your kind review :)
Your such a romantic, it shows in your poetry.
It sure is a wonderful thing.
You seem to be a dreamer as well haha.
You can tell a fair bit from a persons poetry.
I liked this one to.
The rhyme scheme just tops it off.
Wonderful write :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you once again! I look forward to reading some of yours very soon:)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Months Ago

I look forward to it to :)
Your welcome :)
A beautiful poem. Like the flow and the thought of a different world. Enjoyed the visit.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Many thanks! I look forward to reading some of yours as well :)
I like this. A lot. Stanza three needs its sentences juggled to follow the same rhyme sequence. :) I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Once again, thank you:)
Isabella Ivy

7 Months Ago

:):):):):)

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Added on March 14, 2017
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Tags: Love, paradise, dreams, rhyme

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Paul
Paul

Ontario , Canada



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Writing has been a passion of mine, ever since I started taking it seriously about two years ago. My poetry is a constant work in progress, in which I strive to succeed more so every day. Your cons.. more..

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