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A Story by Pax Analog

55-word story miniature for a contest.

Warning
This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

She summons her master from realms of crushed velvet dreaming. Reality’s dark glistening at her chamber door makes her moist as her thighs tremble.

These silk scarves have the tensile strength of titanium wire from Jesus’ incandescent gaze.

Silver hoop.

What a piece of work is Magdalene, how supple and seasoned, how exquisite in fidelity.

© 2009 Pax Analog

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Author's Note

As noted, a minimalist exercise specifically for a 55-word story contest.

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Steven Bilodeau

Wow, I thought this was amazing. I loved this because it avoids end rhymes, it gets right to the point, and it's something universal to the human kind. Also the fact that you were able to condense a huge range of emotions, actions and thoughts in just a few words, which explode a larger reaction in the readers mind. I also liked this because it gave me a sense of a hidden lust, a sense of dark intimacy which we as 'civilized' peoples try to hide. I also liked the exploitation of temptation being very blunt and obvious.