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Bond


A Story by Pax Analog
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Sequel to "Threshold"; both 55-word miniatures for contest.
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This story is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

Jesus causes Magdalene and the hoop to spin like a planet on its axis. Her eyes glaze in rapture.

 
Her breath quickens, silken bound in the silver hoop, divine nipples cherry-hard with yearning.
 
She is the swoon of resurrection, the angel of desire.
 
Eternally she shivers with love for the lord of her immortal glory. 

© 2009 Pax Analog
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Sequel to \"Threshold\"; both 55-word miniatures for contest.
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I love this ... and love the idea of being confined to 55 words ... I think that really focuses the concept and both "Threshold" and "Bond" sparkle poetically. With lines like "She is the swoon of resurrection, the angel of desire" ... this is pure silk ... erotic nirvana ...

If I may be so bold to add …


Magdalene ... the slash between my legs … portal of heaven ... garden of Gethsemane

where Jesus pondered fate … His blood runs down my legs … flesh within my flesh

His thrust like a knife … releasing … the fires of hell … the rains of heaven ...


Your words … a world sublime … sensual wonderland … mine ... an afterthought ...


Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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