Stranger

Stranger

A Poem by Lonely Islander

               



                   Stranger
                   I feel like a stranger in my own surroundings
                   A refugee in my own home
                   Everyone is beside me
                   But I feel...different
                   I need a place to hide
                   The fear of death is slowly eating me up
                   It's a parasite, feeding on my blood
                   Save me.

© 2013 Lonely Islander


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Lonely Islander
I was in a lot of pressure so needed to vent.reviews are appreciated!

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sounds amazingly similar to how i feel in my home... not exactly pleasant. i hope things get better for you

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot:-):-):-D.
Ethereal Eclipse

11 Years Ago

your welcome:) no problem:)
Stark and hurts, how real this feels...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much:-):-):-D.
This sounds quite alarming, perhaps its the red text, I can relate to this, changes are forever occuring in my mind,

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank u so much. I am glad u could relate to it.:-):-):-D.
A short, very intense, emotional piece of work. Loved it. Look forward to reading more of your work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank u so much:-):-):-D.
Welcome death...do not fear it. In the meantime, exercise your passion...I do.

Thank you for visiting my page, today.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank you too:-):-):-D.
Oh this is so touching.... especially to me, I recognize myself in it, as breathing time is so essential sometimes, and we need no others or no thoughts of others, just dwell on our own heartbeat~ this is where my beloved ones feel me. And I them
Pure freedom of venting.... wonderful write...

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It means a lot:-):-):-D.

11 Years Ago

Very welcome my friend :)
This is something we can all probably relate to. Fear of death... Alone...

Well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thanks:-):-):-D.
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Pax
don't let death eat you whole. For me i try to understand each situation looking for positive vibes despite everything in my head rings of despair...
Intense work my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear friend:-):-):-D.
pressure, sadness and etc are great muse. You have done a great job on this intense emotional release. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

Thank u:-):-):-D.
I know EXACTLY how you feel. God knows how many times my dad said, "You don't really think you'll make it in the writing world, do you?", if everyone else is against you, at some point you've just got to say eff them and do whatever you want. This struck home for me, I love this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lonely Islander

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you could connect to this, reaper. Your dad has no idea what he is talking about because yo.. read more

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Added on January 4, 2013
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