Ominous Crown of Gold

The glisten of the crown blinds my heart

Do not allow the queen of crowns to win

In pallid summers the sun cries black tears

The searching eyes could not help but have seen

Delirious, broken pools of dark smears

 

Return! Return! The queen wants a gold crown

Run! Run! Do not stop until light you find

Come Come! For the queen's power is going down

Stop Stop! Fright is building upon its shine

 

Smiling slowly and letting her win all

I cannot see much beyond streaks of fear

Hiding eternally from the gold fall

The ominous crown of gold caused a tear

 

Turning and walking to let the queen be

Torture and deep wounds reflect the old me

 

 

Author's Note

My first sonnet here in WritersCafe.org
It's a bit special and I've included a variety of emotions in it.

Reviews

[Linda]

Wow, this is a beautiful sonnet! I am not a big fan of sonnets BTW, but I didn't know they could get this good, either!
Like I said, very good sonnet and it seems you have a great talent to show the entire community here!
Keep up the great work and keep on writing such beautiful and thoughtful sonnets :D

[Andrea R.]

Thanks! :D

[The Fallen]

Very well written! :)

[Andrea R.]

Thanks a bunch :3

[Sami Khalil]

Well penned . Thank you for sharing .

[Andrea R.]

Thank you for liking this!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...