Snow

Snow

A Poem by Eileen
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Within all has a weakness.

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A snow flake.
By it's self represents many things.
Loneliness. Uniquness. Purity.
A heart that to the touch will melt so quickly.
A hope that is lost much to easily.
A battle fought by the weak, and lost.
You can say it's science.
You can say it's religion.
I don't know what it is.
A snow flake with edges and patterns and line.
Is like us, with it's flaws and imperfections.
With it's weakness to be defeated by heat.
Like our hearts. Defeated by love.

© 2010 Eileen



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i liked it! i wanna write something on "snow" ...thnx! it inspired me...

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incredible, goes perfect with the song video!

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LOVE LOVE LOVE!

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I really liked this one :D

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Eileen...you are better than me. I LOVE THIS ONE. ♥

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Added on December 1, 2010
Last Updated on December 9, 2010
Tags: Snow, Winter, Pain, Heartache, Weakness

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Hi. I'm Eileen. I'm 16 and a junior in high school. I am an artist, a past passion of mine was writing. Thought I am currently more involved in the visual arts. I play guitar, flute, ukulele, a.. more..

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A Poem by Eileen



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