I'm Perfect.

I'm Perfect.

A Poem by Eileen

Every pound, every move, every choice I make is right.
It all happened because fate planned it out.
Every word, every letter, every breath, it's worth it.
It's all meant for something at some point.
It's amazing how much happier you are,
Simply repeating one sentence.
Two words.
Three syllables. 
I'm perfect.
I am.
I was made the way I am,
If I want to be better, I will.
It's all because I'm perfect.

© 2012 Eileen


Author's Note

Eileen
My friend told me that everyday she tells herself she's perfect. So I decided that I am too. I've felt so much better, the more I repeat it the higher my self esteem is.

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when awareness surfaces, such is self reflection, to grasp meaning.
this poem is the depth expressed when creeating a poem itself,
you tune the moment, what is perfection, but perception, life as
seen through the eye of the beholder, excellent job, I liked this ^_^



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this piece.
Im not prefect
yet
I'm perfect.

Posted 4 Years Ago


fate and choice and everything else..
perfection is imperfect and
imperfection is perfect.
it is amazing, the effect words can have on us

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very positive outlook on life, that I wish I could possess. I especially like the part when you are talking about the phrase itself ("Two words. Three Syllables.) It just really stands out to me. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when awareness surfaces, such is self reflection, to grasp meaning.
this poem is the depth expressed when creeating a poem itself,
you tune the moment, what is perfection, but perception, life as
seen through the eye of the beholder, excellent job, I liked this ^_^



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hi. I'm Eileen. I'm 16 and a junior in high school. I am an artist, a past passion of mine was writing. Thought I am currently more involved in the visual arts. I play guitar, flute, ukulele, a.. more..

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