My Heart Goes with You

 

My Heart Goes with You   Though I understand,  it doesn't feel right.  Conspiracies thrive  to hasten this night. Permission's not granted  to alter our plight. Something goes missing  when I'm not with you. Keys to life's pleasures  tower high from view. There's nowhere to go  and nothing to do. The sands through the hourglass,  too quickly, sped. Courage can't throttle  the thoughts in my head on long, lonely nights  in our cold, empty bed. Going brings sadness  and longing builds fear. As uneasy chasms  of feelings draw near, I worry and wonder  how safe you'll be, dear. The evening has come--- farewell kiss, sad adieu. You leave--- but a piece of my heart goes with you. By Sharon Miller Bolander   © 2008 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[None]

You have such a beautiful way about your writing. Each word a jewel to make a total masterpiece to behold. Emotions are so very well displayed, I feel the love in each line. Your last stanza lays out specifically how strong this love is and and the wanting to be near this person always. Your writing is a gorgeous treasure!

[doreen cyr]

Is how I feel with my daughters future plans .
She is graduating this year and wants to move to the city.
Beautiful write
doreen

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the contest with your great poem!

Sal

[Helena]

Bravo Sharon! This was absolutely top class my friend! I had to search for the
10 words...truly. How you managed to so seamlessly interweave them into
this is so amazing.

So very beautiful in every respect and a treasure indeed!

Well done poetess!

~ Helena ~

[M.M.]

good write sad to,hugs mary

[angelina neves]

wonderful poem of farewell!

[Suelou]

Sharon, you have written a beautiful poem of sadness, as well as of fear and the pain. I can relate so much to so much of what you wrote. A very touching write.

[angelinmypocket]

Such a sad, lonely, longing write Sharon. Saturated with tears and fear of the future.
A very sad farewell indeed. My heart was touched by the pain herein. Wonderful, beautiful but so sad.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket