Erased

Written for Tovli's Ten Word Challenge

 

Erased   Earth spoke but few would listen; things changed but few could see. Eyes peeked at species dying while human need ran free. The book of life unwritten lost caring as an art; eternal truths depleted, erased right off the chart. Reiterated message met its mortality.   By Sharon Miller Bolander    © 2008 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Now that was very good and so true. We as humans think that we can treat our earth home as a garbagre dump. We just run free and do not listen.


Earth spoke but few would listen;
things changed but few could see.
Eyes peeked at species dying
while human need ran free.


Please tell me how you do the backgrounds.

[angelina neves]

very very beautiful! wonderfully said!

[Helena]

I just loved the way the 10 words inspired this write from you.
Superb sentiments and a very nicely penned poem!

[Tovli]

a wonderful poem, nicely presented; filled with affect and attitude and a perfect rhymn. enjoyed tovli

[Tammy]

Wonderful poem, Sharon

[Leo Gems]

This is a beautiful poem with such a well meaning message. It is short and sweet as required for the challenge I am sure, but the message means so much more!

Great write... I love it! :)