A Classic Case

 A heart of feathers that flutters

at the faintest brush of lust;

A heart thats rough and rigid

crumbles and cannot cushion.

A growing gravitation to fill the void

left by their own innate faults;

pulled into the passion of a kiss

where dust and wind are one.

Reviews

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Congrats on your award winning poem!! It really is a sweet and beautiful piece!!

[Anya]

Such a sweet, beautiful, wondeful poem!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Picture-Poem contest!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning poem. Well Penned!

[Melissa Kesead]

Brief but beautiful.

[DavidRyan]

It's official, you're an amazing writer. I love you how you use words, structure them, almost using them against each other in order to come to the final conclusion which is always beautiful, complete, and amazing. Well done.

[Leap]

Very cool. I love the bouncing of the words off one another. Saw the picture too - good contest.

[BABSIE BEE]

Sooooo sweet n true, well done.
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