The Beast

A Story by Kevin

Short and to the point.

Out of the darkness the beast attacks; powerful, large, and hungry for my blood. Hungry for my soul. I run in vain and cry to the heavens, there is no answer. Hot breath beats down upon me. Tripping over unseen debris, it has me. I awake screaming at the nothing but my own darkened bedroom.

© 2008 Kevin

Author's Note

I've been suffering through writer's block. This contest submission may have broken the dam. Let me know what you think.

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Salvatore Buttaci

Congratulations for winning the 55 contest!

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago

Tovli

well done. graphic and bold. a blast of a story at 55! tovli

Posted 15 Years Ago

Salvatore Buttaci

I can see you do like horror. I like your poem.
Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago

Kevin Vorshak

Cool. Nicely written.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 13, 2008

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Kevin

Bridgeport, WV

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Hmmmmm well if the feds are watching. I'm twenty seven years old, like writing romance novels, and detest violent sports. O.k. if this is a site is secure from government eyes, then I turn 40 this y.. more..