Last bunch of words.

These are my last bunch of words.

I have always wished to publish my book, to become an author.

But it's all about destiny, I guess.

Today, I just want to scribble for a few minutes.

My desire for writing, vanished. 

I miss that moment when that lady had influenced me for writing. 

I was a teen,I wrote my first poem. 

Just because, it was my homework....

That lady teacher, was my strength. 

She got so close to me, but one day she had to leave.

"Mam, your little girl wrote so many poems and stories. 

But you were not there." 

I feel like crying, as I recall those last words of her

 "Chalte chalte tu mere ye geet yaad rakhna, kabhi alvida na kehna."

I really miss her so very much.  

Mam, this is my last poem and this is for you.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[teanami]

I like this. It reminds me of when my 7th grade English teacher said one of my short stories sounded like Poe. I Still think about that moment when I decide to write because it makes me think I have something to offer.

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

ya, teachers are very special.. evn I came to know that I can write because f my teacher.. I always thought dat i wil becum big big author na bt thn........nywyz thnks for d review..

[Emily]

I love the story it tells!
Keep it up!!

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

Thank you........

[Kelsey Schadt]

Hi after revisiting this poem I had another suggestion. What about translating her last words into English in the line following?

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

dat line is a song na..

[Kelsey Schadt]

Oh its placement made me think it was her words. My mistake. Maybe a period at the end, after her would help clarify it is not part of the same idea

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

dese r her words nly.. actually she sung dis song for me on d last day..for me..

[Kelsey Schadt]

Interesting paradigm of a writer who no longer wants to write. A suggestion would be to reconsider some of your word choices. For instance, in your first line, these are my last bunch of words," I feel like the word ,"bunch" isn't strong enough for the importance of last words. Perhaps a stronger word could be used. I hope you rediscover your love of writing!

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

Thank u so vry much for sharing ur view. I never thought lyk dat (bunch), ur review is really helpful. nywyz, abt my luv for writing..... IMPOSSIBLE. It's over.

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!

[Cafeland Khamoshiyan]

thanks a lot for d review. This was my last work.