The Room Without Light

You couldn’t possibly have poured your glass for me,

expecting I would drink, hold and

taste from you-

without spilling.

Reviews

[lightsong]

a glass is never enough, that is first, second, no one is perfect, and to expect no spilling at all is not fair, this what I think of reading Your little piece here.

[Perdition]

Well I believe you find the greatest truth in that moment when you do spill and even more...a possible growth with the one who dares to pour their willingness and loveliness of the heart into any glass at all. Let the revolution begin..lol..Thanks Light!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I keep coming back to these words on this page trying to figure out why I have shut the lights out, closed the door, and locked it up tightly, when my intentions are to make everything invisible ...visible but I m thinking that is the problem with intentions.

[Perdition]

Perhaps it scares you? Everything intangible has a tangible nature and believe it or not..you are human. Albeit a Superhuman but your intentions are not so beyond the realm that you cannot return to see my nicks and perhaps the words that make you want to lock the door. Tell me what you feel Queenie...why is this poem creating your problems. Intentions? What is there you intend?

[Perdition]

Is this a poem you want to throw out the window? One that is not up to what you have seen by way of my abstracts...SAY IT!! It's okay ya know...Or is it the opposite? Something you haven't felt from me before and you want to tell me to go back or go forward...This is WHY you are here...This is WHY I take in what you come to say. Not saying I would take it if I should disagree but I would respect it. We all need to "try a little try" every now and then. But you do see buggered with this one and maybe that's not the right word, but I don't know until you begin to tell me Queenie. Well I kinda do but ....here's your chance ..lol.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

you always know the know and I know that you and your know that I know but for some reason I feel like I don't know and need you to tell me,,,ya know? so yes, I am always afraid that I know the answer ,no I do not want to throw this one out the window, yes I have felt this from you before ...and give me back my damn piece of toast will ya?

[Perdition]

Now we have the issue. Uh..nope. But..I will give ya time to formulate what ya think ya know if ya feel ya know ya know...And ya want it...then again? Tomorrow is a fickle beast :). Or maybe I'll turn all shades of pale and move on with not knowing what ya know...although it would bother me...Ya know?

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You don't just seem like the pale shade type. I already knew you weren't giving back my toast...I didn't really expect you to. ...but thank you for asking:) Ill be back again and again...I sometimes wish I could go away but darn it ..it won't let me.

[Perdition]

Here..take my fish ...I'll run out for non toast, toast..You can keep the scales til I figure out where the hell we are ;)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I know exactly where we are standing ..at a beginning in the dark before there is light.. and it is really more about me shaking the cup then you spilling. I want you to see what I wanna feel as crazy as that sounds. There is always fear then your right because I am human. fear in my nature is all I have ever known.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I lied...fear is not all I've ever known..it was just what I wanted... to have an excuse to be afraid....

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

wait...does that mean you stole my toast and my cup half full?

[Perdition]

Chomp ..chomp...chomp ..gulp..Wha?

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

That does it...Im switching to tea and biscuits...maybe we should use napkins and pinky fingers this time around? oh and I brought a candle...this place is so dark!

[Perdition]

Could have been just as easily half empty and twice the depth. Hey, all I did was invite the hour of night, You are the one that illumined the dark webbed canvas with your candle.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

so your admitting to drinking all the wine....and shooting the cork into the light fixture? Plus your blaming me for all these spider webs I tripped in and ripped up my tendon...breaking my tooth? We gotta get some new games...these tiddly winks are for kids!

[Perdition]

I admit to nothing while unveiling everything and of course that cork was all me and much more. As for the trip of spiders, the torn tendon, and broken tooth..Well, the only game I truly see beyond tiddly winks is your moment inside the web where this persona you wear turns as actual as the mask I flash in my profile photographs. The actual me..Now THAT would be a game worthy of webs. But we both know we write of things beyond those deeds.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

oh, you mean i got some in the cup?

[Perdition]

A reckless crime indeed. Thanks Queenie.