En Mouvement

I’ll watch you spin

live cinder in my locket

blue eyed diamond sparkling

returning from the water’s smile

 

Not everything now must be so still

while you ask me if I’ll

refine this path I must cross-

each touch of blood we leave must be counted

each bridge we digest releases the depths of infractions

 

The way to my death

is just beyond that rise

go and see

come again and tell me with

just these lovely words-

 

you are smiling

and I-

I am spinning

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Deep, intelligent and lovely. Lots to consider in here.

[Perdition]

The greatest poet of all, and a painter to boot or perhaps vice versa. Glad you enjoyed it! Happy Holidays Ken~

[Perdition]

Wait? You thought I was talking about you?..hahaha. Thank you Ken..truly~

[¿]

Once left for the route of death, can one come back easily to tell you those lovely words? Well your love might can bring your love back!
In depth and profound read from you, depicting in all my ways. Thanks for sharing :)

[Perdition]

So wonderful to have you visit this old humble site
again Tahsih.Z...you may indeed and thank you so much!

[¿]

You're always welcome Joseph! :)

[NotUsinganymore]

Interesting poem. I enoyed iy a lot

[Perdition]

Thanks Jung Lee

[Perdition]

Thanks for your comment

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Here I feel like you are inside me looking out into the happenstance. Glancing just beyond the horizon. It is strange and startling but warm and bright. Is this what riding a cloud feels like?

[Perdition]

Well I've looked at clouds from both side now...Up a down and still somehow it's clouds illusions I recall...turns out i really don't know clouds at all :) Thank you Oh great and powerful Walker...I hope it at least reached a corner and hey...no wip..lol.